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Well done, Phoebe - virtually all planning done and evident on blog. Just some risk assessments and possibly a few plans for using the two weeks when we get back... Article is excellent and some promising photography work -  you may just want to reshoot one or two to avoid chopping off the top of Amy's head - it wouldn't take long, as you know exactly the poses you want.... I look forward to seeing you start creating your pages...

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This is looking super, Phoebe - you have produced some good quality research and planning - just make sure you finish off any remaining tasks this week. I am really pleased with the work you have done.

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Some very proficient and, in places, excellent research, Phoebe! You cover a good range of topics and achieve a good depth of detail, as well as taking care to use a nice range of presentation strategies. Keep using my comments to improve posts further. Do you have any more research tasks to complete? Well done on completing your prelim tasks.